Writing Practice
Write a short paragraph about you or your family.
Write about you in about 100 – 150 words using the comment box below. We will help you to correct your writing by replying to your comment. With this, you can check back and learn how to write better. Remember always “keep it short and simple” in your writing.
My name's Hoang Phong, I twenty years old. I'm student of Saigonact colleges school. Now, I living in Go Vap district, and I am learning there. my hometown in Tra Vinh. My home to HCM city about 180km. I sometime visiting my hometown by motorbike or coach. My family there are four peoples. my father, my mother and brother. My parent are farmer, they are very rustic. Free time, my father is driver. And my mother is cook very tasty. I like eating her dishes. I don't know why I love my dad more than mom. My brother name's Phi,fourteen years old. It is a good student and my brother is the handsomer than I but is unpleasant.
------------------------------------------------------------my name's tam.i'm twenty two year old.i'm a student of saigonac . I'm lived in a happy family,and my family isn't rich,i leaved my family then i moved to a morden city where i can study and i can find my future whether i anywhere but i usually miss about their, they sweat to make enough money in order for me to study i love my family ,in my eye a happy is family i hope i will success on the road then i choose.
Tam, remember the subject "I' always use in capitalized letter.uhm!!! i high one meter sixty two,and weight about 48 or 49 kilogam I like eating more fruit and i like drink juice or coffee or vitamins I love music and i like songs as is yesterday one more and i lay my love on you or hold me for a while or you can win if you want.....ect I like flowers and i like more rose,i like go to traveling and visiting my friend ,and i love everybody
I'll told you short but it's all about me. Quyen's my name but you can call me Q. I'm 28 years old. May be it's too old to study English. Now I'm accountant. I live at a place which has the beautiful beach in VietNam. Can you guess it? I have an ambitiuos that once day I'll get MBA degree at aboard. Just in my dream because I have not enuogh money and my English is not good. Orange is my favourite colour. I usually watching TV when I have free time. And somtimes I go out with my friend.That's all about me. If I have any mistake, please correct.
Thanks a lot. I hope that you can help my English. Best wishes all!
thank you for help me ,I will try study , study more and study forever ,I don't know what is english when I'm twenty one old,I knew less about it now. I felt enjoy when I think about it ,my job is use english more but ability my speaking english is very bad now ,I have already had two course english at saigonACT, IC0 and IC1 ,and now I learning IC2 ,I will finished my course in two year.
I was born in HA NOI but I live in lâm đồng,It is about 50 KM from dalat city ,but I living in HCM city ,my family has six people ,my parents and two brother and one sister ,I'm big son in my family. my brother learning at hometown ,my parents are a good farmers I felt happy when I goes back home ,this long time I don't visit my family because I must go to study ,I just can call phone or messege when I miss about my family.
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Hi every one! My name is Kim Phuong. Iam twenty years old. I am a student of Sai Gon University, and my major is English (Business-Tourism). I live with my family in HCMc. My family has only three members, my parents and me. Therefore, sometimes I feel a little sad and alone. I like panting very much. But I don't have enough time to do it. I aslo enjoy writing short stories,... that' s on. Good bye!!!:)
I am Lakshmi. My family has 9 members, my parents, brother sister and their kids. My in-law's family has 18 members, my inlaw, her daugther, 4 sons and their children. me and my husband are the youngest in the family.
Her name is Yanela, She looks a little like me. But I’m tall an she isn’t. We like the same kind of music. We have the same friends, and this is good. Sometimes we discuss but always we solve the problem. We studied in the same school but I was expelled from this school We don’t like the same kind of food because I like the spicy food and she hates it. Now I live with her, and sometimes it’s boring stay with her but it’s my sister.
my name is tina and i am 22 years old . i have a nuclear family , my father , mother , a brother and 2 sister . im the second child in my family . my father was retiree from training and education and he is M.A. in pyschology of education. my mother is a manager of guidance school and she is B.S. in science . my brother is older than me and he is a business man and about myself i should tell you that im a student of english literature and i love my field of study and next year i will be graduate and i want to work in school as an english teacher.i said above that i have 2 sisters that younger than me they are high school student and they are internet maniac. they are so nice girls i love them so much because they always make me laugh. I love my family because they are wonderful , they are very much supportive , they are my inspiration in life . im sure that i have a great family because we are always do our best to help ourselves to reach our goal. we are hand to hand in every situation both bad and good.
would you plz check my paragraph about describing my family as soon as possible ??? thank you so much
I have a big family, and we all get very well. My parents' names are Wadhaa and Saad. My mother is a Social worker, and my father is a teacher. I have one younger brother. His name is Nawaf. He is seventeen years old. I also have younger sisters they name ' Anood she is eighteen and Daloo she is therteen.
Hello. I’m Thang and I come from Hung Yen. I’m 18 years old. Now, I study at Foreign Trade University. Today, I introduce you to my family. My family has 4 members: my parents, my older brother and me. My parents are good farmers. They are hard-working. My father is 47 years old, 4 years older than my mother. He is very generous and helpful.He is also funny, too.So, my neighbors and my relatives enjoy he very much. My mother is a good housewife, she is also a good mother, too. She cooks very delicious. I love her dishes very much. My mother works very hard. She usually finds many thing to do. Although, she look younger than her age. My brother is 24 years old. He is an engineer. At the moment, he is working at my hometown. He look seriously but he is very funny.He usually joke with everyone around him. Sometimes he shares his experience with me about learning, living skill. My family is very attentive to me. So, i love it very much. Now, i am living in Hanoi. Sometimes i feel sad and lonely. i miss my family very much!!!
Sorry, Your writing must be in English!
Family means love, trust, communication, being together, sharing, understanding, listening, caring and space. My family is a joint family (mother,father,grandmother,grandfather,brother and me) What makes us a whole is that we all understand what the meaning of family means to us as a family. With such a big family we all understand the roles that need to be played to achieve the meaning of family.The head of my family my grandfather, he is a sort of strict and a sort of sweet. The sweetest thing about him is that if we want something he will get it even if we he is sick or not well. Next in the family is my grandmother she cooks the best food in the world and is the best and sweetest grandmother in the world . Next is my father,the best thing about him is that he explains me whatever mistake i have made before scolding. Then is my mother she is very understanding and caring , i can share many things with her and ask her about any doubt. the last one in my family is my brother , the worst thing about him is he fights with me very frequently I love him when he's asleep because it is the only time when he looks cute and does not speak any word . On the whole my family isthe best family in the world.
Hi Tina, please take a look at your corrected writing below:
my name is Tyler
Hi everyone.I'm Shirley.I'm 15 years old.Today,I'll tell about my best family.My family had four peoples(my parents, my older brother, and me).My mom name is My~.My father name is Phuc, and my older brother name is Ken.We lived in Phan Thiet city for long time ago.Ken and I are stilling in a nice high school. We are good students in school.My mom job is doctor. She's a good doctor.She is working very diligent with her favorite jod.Also,She's cook food very delicious,and I like her food.My father jod is businessman.He's smart person,and is a gentle father.Finally,I very very love my family.^^
love your writing Shirley it was good i used it for my assignment and got 100 percent thank you
My name is Afrah Ali I am 30 years old living in kingdom of Bahrain . Iam Marreid and i have three kids Ayah,Ali and Adam, Iam working in yosuif khalil almoayyed company as exective secertary handiling all secertarial and administraion work such as fililing typing and writing all kind of crospandence i like reading and traveling to explor diffrents area and discovering culturs of the countires
Hello Afrah, Please take a look at the correction below:
I love my family becouse everybody love each other . so I am happy forever and also learn one to another always my family understand every stuation .so I am respected my family . so when I lived with my family am very happy.
I love my family becouse everybody love each other . so I am happy forever and also learn one to another always my family understand every stuation .so I am respected my family . so when I lived with my family am very happy.
My name is pyaar. I'm 16 year old. we are four
Hi, my name is Thu.I live Hanoi now and I come from Namdinh. But I live in Hanoi. My parents live there with my brother. My family is large. There are 6 people include: my mother, my father, my elder sister, my younger sister, my brother and I. My parents were workers at the same company. My parents had retired for 3 years. My elder sister is a first year student in Hanoi university. My younger sister and brother are pupils. My family is happy and we love each other so much.
My name is Tony Nicholls, I come from Paama Island. I work for Tahos Timber as a General Manager for the last 12 years. There are six (6) of us altogether in my family, my father and mother, my three (3) brothers and me. Benjamin Nicholls my father is an Office Manager for the Bourgeios Company Limited. My mother Wendy Nicholls is a house wife. Xavier Nicholls the second elder brother is a driver for Swity Company Limited, my third elder brother Cyrille Nicholls is a chef at the Breakas Resort, Michel Nicholls the younger brother works for Tahos Timber as a sales manager. As a French speaking person, I chose to spend my free time, to read the entire English article in the Daily Post News Paper, I also like to read my English Bible and some story books. Reading makes me learn to understand what is being said; when the opportunity arises I use what I’m learning to communicate with my wife and children by speaking or writing. I Choose (BWS) Basic Writing Skills, to increase my English writing skills. Also as it is one of the introduction courses that I must do, in order to move on to the next level. English language is very important as it is one of the most spoken languages in the world of business today. This course will help me to write and speak better English where I work. I am expecting to gain a substantial wealth of knowledge of English from this course.
My name is Afrah Ali I am 30 years old living in kingdom of Bahrain . Iam Marreid and i have three kids Ayah,Ali and Adam, Iam working in yosuif khalil almoayyed company as exective secertary handiling all secertarial and administraion work such as fililing typing and writing all kind of crospandence i like reading and traveling to explor diffrents area and discovering culturs of the countires
My name Hisham,i am fourty year old.I live at Changkat Lada.I'm a student of Sekolah Menengah Changkat Lada.My hobby is surfing the internet and my ambition is be an expert in computer.My Family has four people my father,my mother and my sister.My father is a business man,my mother is a factory workers,and my sister is still studying at secondary school.My father is expert in business.he can persuade people to buy the item he sells.My mother is good cooking,my mother cook is very tasty.my sister is a clever student.In her class she is one of the most intelligent.finally,thanks for reading my writing.
Hello Amiral, Please check the correction made below:
I hope this rewriting will help you more.My hoppy My hoppies are swimming,sewing and reading.First,is swimming I like to swim because it's make me comfortable and relaxing.I swim most of my day .Second,sewing I learn sewing from my grandmother she teach me how to sew since then I sew my ripped clothes and i think it's a good and useful for me. So I am glad that I learn how to sew and I love to sew . Third,reading it's an interesting hoppy. I like to read books and magazine ,but I don't like to read a news paper.Sometimes I go to the library to read and I think the library is the quite place I ever seen.Finally,those are my hoppies and I like to do them all my free time. Please,make sure that u will and find my mistake and edit them . Thanks a lot
Hello Hanan, Please take a look at the correction below:
I rewrote your writing in a better way, hope it is helpful.Hi Quyen, your correction can be like below: I'll tell you something short but it's all about me. Quyen's my name but you can call me Q. I'm 28 years old. Maybe I'm too old to study English. Now I'm an accountant. I live in a place which has the beautiful beach in VietNam. Can you guess it? I have an ambition that one day I'll get MBA degree aboard. But I think it's just in my dream because I don't have enough money. And my English is not good. Orange is my favourite colour. I usually watch TV when I have free time. And I sometimes go out with my friend. That's all about me.