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Paragraph writing: About you or your family

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Write a short paragraph about you or your family.

Write about you in about 100 – 150 words using the comment box below. We will help you to correct your writing by replying to your comment. With this, you can check back and learn how to write better. Remember always “keep it short and simple” in your writing.

38 comments on “Paragraph writing: About you or your family

  1. My name's Hoang Phong, I twenty years old. I'm student of Saigonact colleges school. Now, I living in Go Vap district, and I am learning there. my hometown in Tra Vinh. My home to HCM city about 180km. I sometime visiting my hometown by motorbike or coach. My family there are four peoples. my father, my mother and brother. My parent are farmer, they are very rustic. Free time, my father is driver. And my mother is cook very tasty. I like eating her dishes. I don't know why I love my dad more than mom. My brother name's Phi,fourteen years old. It is a good student and my brother is the handsomer than I but is unpleasant.

    Hello Phong, Please take a look at the correction of your writing below: Phong em xem bai sua ben duoi nhe!
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    My name's Hoang Phong. I am twenty years old. I'm a student of Saigonact college. Now, I live in Go Vap district, and I am learning there. My hometown is in Tra Vinh. It is about 180 km from HCMC.. I sometimes visit my hometown by motorbike or coach.
    My family has four people; my father, my mother, brother and me. My parents are farmers, they are very rustic.
    My father is a driver. And my mother is a housewife. She cooks very well. Her food is tasty. I like eating her dishes.
    I don't know why I love my dad more than mom.
    My brother's name's Phi, fourteen years old. He is a good student, and he is more handsome than I am, .... and I am unpleasant. :)

  2. my name's tam.i'm twenty two year old.i'm a student of saigonac . I'm lived in a happy family,and my family isn't rich,i leaved my family then i moved to a morden city where i can study and i can find my future whether i anywhere but i usually miss about their, they sweat to make enough money in order for me to study i love my family ,in my eye a happy is family i hope i will success on the road then i choose.

    Hi Tam, Please take a look at the correction below:
    My name's Tam. I am twenty two years old. I'm a student of SaigonACT. I live in a happy family,and my family isn't rich. I left my family and moved to a morden city, HCMC, where i can study and i can find my future. I always miss my family wherever I am. They work hard to make enough money for me to study
    I love my family. In my opinion,a happiness is a good family. I hope I will succeed on the road that I choose.
    Tam, remember the subject "I' always use in capitalized letter.

  3. uhm!!! i high one meter sixty two,and weight about 48 or 49 kilogam I like eating more fruit and i like drink juice or coffee or vitamins I love music and i like songs as is yesterday one more and i lay my love on you or hold me for a while or you can win if you want.....ect I like flowers and i like more rose,i like go to traveling and visiting my friend ,and i love everybody

    The correction can be as below:
    I am 1.62 m tall high,and weight about 48 or 49 kilograms. I like eating a lot of fruit, drink juice, coffee or vitamins. I love music, and I like some English songs which are "yesterday once more", "I lay my love on you", "Hold me for a while", "you can win if you want", ect... I like flowers. and I like rose more. I like to go traveling, and to visit my friend.
    And I love everybody.

  4. I'll told you short but it's all about me. Quyen's my name but you can call me Q. I'm 28 years old. May be it's too old to study English. Now I'm accountant. I live at a place which has the beautiful beach in VietNam. Can you guess it? I have an ambitiuos that once day I'll get MBA degree at aboard. Just in my dream because I have not enuogh money and my English is not good. Orange is my favourite colour. I usually watching TV when I have free time. And somtimes I go out with my friend.That's all about me. If I have any mistake, please correct.

    Hi Quyen, your correction can be like below:
    I'll tell you something short but it's all about me. Quyen's my name but you can call me Q. I'm 28 years old. Maybe I'm too old to study English. Now I'm an accountant. I live in a place which has the beautiful beach in VietNam. Can you guess it? I have an ambition that one day I'll get MBA degree aboard. But I think it's just in my dream because I don't have enough money. And my English is not good.
    Orange is my favourite colour. I usually watch TV when I have free time. And I sometimes go out with my friend. That's all about me.

  5. thank you for help me ,I will try study , study more and study forever ,I don't know what is english when I'm twenty one old,I knew less about it now. I felt enjoy when I think about it ,my job is use english more but ability my speaking english is very bad now ,I have already had two course english at saigonACT, IC0 and IC1 ,and now I learning IC2 ,I will finished my course in two year.

  6. I was born in HA NOI but I live in lâm đồng,It is about 50 KM from dalat city ,but I living in HCM city ,my family has six people ,my parents and two brother and one sister ,I'm big son in my family. my brother learning at hometown ,my parents are a good farmers I felt happy when I goes back home ,this long time I don't visit my family because I must go to study ,I just can call phone or messege when I miss about my family.

    I was born in Hanoi, but our family moved to Lam Dong, and lived there. Lam Dong is about 50 km from Da Lat city. At the moment, I live in HCM city, because I am studying at college here.
    My family has six people; my parents, my two brothers, and one sister, I am the eldest son in my family.
    My parents are good farmers. They are hard-working. My younger brother is learning in our hometown...............(Tam, you should tell more about your other family members here)
    I feel happy whenever I go back home to visit my family. It is usually a long time that I don't have time to visit my family because I must go to school. I can just call the one the phone or message them on mobile phone when I miss them.
    I love my family.

  7. really i feel very happy by reading your website content.i want this type of paragraph can you send me please. thank you for your department.

  8. Hi every one! My name is Kim Phuong. Iam twenty years old. I am a student of Sai Gon University, and my major is English (Business-Tourism). I live with my family in HCMc. My family has only three members, my parents and me. Therefore, sometimes I feel a little sad and alone. I like panting very much. But I don't have enough time to do it. I aslo enjoy writing short stories,... that' s on. Good bye!!!:)

    Hello Kim Phuong
    Please take a look below for your writing correction.
    My name is Kim Phuong. I am twenty years old. I am a student of Sai Gon University, and my major is English (Business-Tourism).
    I live with my family in HCMC. My family has only three members, my parents and me. Therefore, sometimes I feel a little sad and lonely.
    I like painting very much. But I don't have enough time to do it. I aslo enjoy writing short stories,...
    Phuong, your writing is good. you have only some minor mistakes, if you pay close attention on using language, we think that your English writing is a lot better.

  9. I am Lakshmi. My family has 9 members, my parents, brother sister and their kids. My in-law's family has 18 members, my inlaw, her daugther, 4 sons and their children. me and my husband are the youngest in the family.

    Lakshmi. Below is something about your writing.It is a good idea if you can state clearly about who members of your family and family in-law in detailed manner, so that people can understand better.
    I am Lakshmi. My family has 9 members; my parents, brother, sister, and their kids.
    My in-law's family has 18 members, my in-laws, her daugther, 4 sons and their children.
    I and my husband are the youngest in the family.

  10. Her name is Yanela, She looks a little like me. But I’m tall an she isn’t. We like the same kind of music. We have the same friends, and this is good. Sometimes we discuss but always we solve the problem. We studied in the same school but I was expelled from this school We don’t like the same kind of food because I like the spicy food and she hates it. Now I live with her, and sometimes it’s boring stay with her but it’s my sister.

  11. my name is tina and i am 22 years old . i have a nuclear family , my father , mother , a brother and 2 sister . im the second child in my family . my father was retiree from training and education and he is M.A. in pyschology of education. my mother is a manager of guidance school and she is B.S. in science . my brother is older than me and he is a business man and about myself i should tell you that im a student of english literature and i love my field of study and next year i will be graduate and i want to work in school as an english teacher.i said above that i have 2 sisters that younger than me they are high school student and they are internet maniac. they are so nice girls i love them so much because they always make me laugh. I love my family because they are wonderful , they are very much supportive , they are my inspiration in life . im sure that i have a great family because we are always do our best to help ourselves to reach our goal. we are hand to hand in every situation both bad and good.

  12. would you plz check my paragraph about describing my family as soon as possible ??? thank you so much

  13. I have a big family, and we all get very well. My parents' names are Wadhaa and Saad. My mother is a Social worker, and my father is a teacher. I have one younger brother. His name is Nawaf. He is seventeen years old. I also have younger sisters they name ' Anood she is eighteen and Daloo she is therteen.

  14. Hello. I’m Thang and I come from Hung Yen. I’m 18 years old. Now, I study at Foreign Trade University. Today, I introduce you to my family. My family has 4 members: my parents, my older brother and me. My parents are good farmers. They are hard-working. My father is 47 years old, 4 years older than my mother. He is very generous and helpful.He is also funny, too.So, my neighbors and my relatives enjoy he very much. My mother is a good housewife, she is also a good mother, too. She cooks very delicious. I love her dishes very much. My mother works very hard. She usually finds many thing to do. Although, she look younger than her age. My brother is 24 years old. He is an engineer. At the moment, he is working at my hometown. He look seriously but he is very funny.He usually joke with everyone around him. Sometimes he shares his experience with me about learning, living skill. My family is very attentive to me. So, i love it very much. Now, i am living in Hanoi. Sometimes i feel sad and lonely. i miss my family very much!!!

  15. Family means love, trust, communication, being together, sharing, understanding, listening, caring and space. My family is a joint family (mother,father,grandmother,grandfather,brother and me) What makes us a whole is that we all understand what the meaning of family means to us as a family. With such a big family we all understand the roles that need to be played to achieve the meaning of family.The head of my family my grandfather, he is a sort of strict and a sort of sweet. The sweetest thing about him is that if we want something he will get it even if we he is sick or not well. Next in the family is my grandmother she cooks the best food in the world and is the best and sweetest grandmother in the world . Next is my father,the best thing about him is that he explains me whatever mistake i have made before scolding. Then is my mother she is very understanding and caring , i can share many things with her and ask her about any doubt. the last one in my family is my brother , the worst thing about him is he fights with me very frequently I love him when he's asleep because it is the only time when he looks cute and does not speak any word . On the whole my family isthe best family in the world.

  16. Hi Tina, please take a look at your corrected writing below:

    My name is tina, and I am 22 years old. I have a nuclear family; included my father , mother , a brother and 2 sisters . I'm the second child in my family. My father was retiree from training and education and he has an M.A. in psychology of education. My mother is a manager of guidance school, and she has a B.S. in science. My brother is older than me. He is a businessman.

    And now I am going to tell you about myself. I'm a student of English literature, and I love my field of study.Next year I will graduate and I want to work in school as an english teacher. As I mentioned above that I have 2 sisters, they are my younger sisters. They are high school students, and they are internet maniac. They are so nice girls, I love them so much because they always make me laugh.

    I love my family because they are wonderful , they are very much supportive , they are my inspiration in life .I'm sure that I have a great family because we are always do our best to help ourselves to reach our goal. We are hand to hand in every situation both bad and good.

  17. Hi everyone.I'm Shirley.I'm 15 years old.Today,I'll tell about my best family.My family had four peoples(my parents, my older brother, and me).My mom name is My~.My father name is Phuc, and my older brother name is Ken.We lived in Phan Thiet city for long time ago.Ken and I are stilling in a nice high school. We are good students in school.My mom job is doctor. She's a good doctor.She is working very diligent with her favorite jod.Also,She's cook food very delicious,and I like her food.My father jod is businessman.He's smart person,and is a gentle father.Finally,I very very love my family.^^

  18. love your writing Shirley it was good i used it for my assignment and got 100 percent thank you

  19. My name is Afrah Ali I am 30 years old living in kingdom of Bahrain . Iam Marreid and i have three kids Ayah,Ali and Adam, Iam working in yosuif khalil almoayyed company as exective secertary handiling all secertarial and administraion work such as fililing typing and writing all kind of crospandence i like reading and traveling to explor diffrents area and discovering culturs of the countires

  20. Hello Afrah, Please take a look at the correction below:

    My name is Afrah Ali. I am 30 years old and I live in kingdom of Bahrain. I am married and I have three kids; Ayah,Ali and Adam. I work in yosuif khalil almoayyed company as an executive secretary. I handle all secertarial and administration work such as filing, typing and writing all kinds of correspondence. I like reading and travelling to explore different areas and discovering culture of the countries.

  21. I love my family becouse everybody love each other . so I am happy forever and also learn one to another always my family understand every stuation .so I am respected my family . so when I lived with my family am very happy.

  22. I love my family becouse everybody love each other . so I am happy forever and also learn one to another always my family understand every stuation .so I am respected my family . so when I lived with my family am very happy.

  23. Hi, my name is Thu.I live Hanoi now and I come from Namdinh. But I live in Hanoi. My parents live there with my brother. My family is large. There are 6 people include: my mother, my father, my elder sister, my younger sister, my brother and I. My parents were workers at the same company. My parents had retired for 3 years. My elder sister is a first year student in Hanoi university. My younger sister and brother are pupils. My family is happy and we love each other so much.

  24. My name is Tony Nicholls, I come from Paama Island. I work for Tahos Timber as a General Manager for the last 12 years. There are six (6) of us altogether in my family, my father and mother, my three (3) brothers and me. Benjamin Nicholls my father is an Office Manager for the Bourgeios Company Limited. My mother Wendy Nicholls is a house wife. Xavier Nicholls the second elder brother is a driver for Swity Company Limited, my third elder brother Cyrille Nicholls is a chef at the Breakas Resort, Michel Nicholls the younger brother works for Tahos Timber as a sales manager. As a French speaking person, I chose to spend my free time, to read the entire English article in the Daily Post News Paper, I also like to read my English Bible and some story books. Reading makes me learn to understand what is being said; when the opportunity arises I use what I’m learning to communicate with my wife and children by speaking or writing. I Choose (BWS) Basic Writing Skills, to increase my English writing skills. Also as it is one of the introduction courses that I must do, in order to move on to the next level. English language is very important as it is one of the most spoken languages in the world of business today. This course will help me to write and speak better English where I work. I am expecting to gain a substantial wealth of knowledge of English from this course.

  25. My name is Afrah Ali I am 30 years old living in kingdom of Bahrain . Iam Marreid and i have three kids Ayah,Ali and Adam, Iam working in yosuif khalil almoayyed company as exective secertary handiling all secertarial and administraion work such as fililing typing and writing all kind of crospandence i like reading and traveling to explor diffrents area and discovering culturs of the countires

  26. My name Hisham,i am fourty year old.I live at Changkat Lada.I'm a student of Sekolah Menengah Changkat Lada.My hobby is surfing the internet and my ambition is be an expert in computer.My Family has four people my father,my mother and my sister.My father is a business man,my mother is a factory workers,and my sister is still studying at secondary school.My father is expert in business.he can persuade people to buy the item he sells.My mother is good cooking,my mother cook is very tasty.my sister is a clever student.In her class she is one of the most intelligent.finally,thanks for reading my writing.

  27. Hello Amiral, Please check the correction made below:

    My name is Hisham, I am forty(40)/fourteen(14) years old. I live in Changkat Lada. I am a student of Sekolah Menengah Changkat Lada. My hobby is surfing the internet, my ambition is to be an expert in computer science. My family has four people, my father, my mother, my sister, and me. My father is a businessman, my mother is a factory worker, and my sister is still studying at Secondary school. My father is an expert in business, he can persuade people to buy the items he sells. My mother is a good cook. Her food is very tasty. My sister is a clever student, she is one of the most intelligent one in her class.
    I hope this rewriting will help you more.

  28. My hoppy My hoppies are swimming,sewing and reading.First,is swimming I like to swim because it's make me comfortable and relaxing.I swim most of my day .Second,sewing I learn sewing from my grandmother she teach me how to sew since then I sew my ripped clothes and i think it's a good and useful for me. So I am glad that I learn how to sew and I love to sew . Third,reading it's an interesting hoppy. I like to read books and magazine ,but I don't like to read a news paper.Sometimes I go to the library to read and I think the library is the quite place I ever seen.Finally,those are my hoppies and I like to do them all my free time. Please,make sure that u will and find my mistake and edit them . Thanks a lot

  29. Hello Hanan, Please take a look at the correction below:

    My hobbies are swimming, sewing, and reading. Let's talk about my first hobby, swimming. I like swimming because it makes me comfortable and relaxed. I swim most of the days in a week. Second, Sewing is good and useful for me. I learn sewing from my grandmother. She began teaching me how to sew when I was ......Sine then I sew to repair my ripped clothes. So I am glad that I know how to sew and I love sewing. My third hobby is reading. Reading is interesting. I like to read books, and magazines, but I don't like to read newspapers. I sometimes go to the library to read, and I like reading in the library because it is a quiet place.
    I rewrote your writing in a better way, hope it is helpful.

  30. Hi Quyen, your correction can be like below: I'll tell you something short but it's all about me. Quyen's my name but you can call me Q. I'm 28 years old. Maybe I'm too old to study English. Now I'm an accountant. I live in a place which has the beautiful beach in VietNam. Can you guess it? I have an ambition that one day I'll get MBA degree aboard. But I think it's just in my dream because I don't have enough money. And my English is not good. Orange is my favourite colour. I usually watch TV when I have free time. And I sometimes go out with my friend. That's all about me.

  31. Hello everyone, Today I will tell you something about my family and me. There are 7 members in my family: 4 sisters, 1 brother, 1 little sister and me. My parents were past away for a long time. All of my sisters including my younger sister are married and have their kids. My brother, who is younger than me. His name is Viet, but my family, my relatives and my neighbors usually call him Đau. Đau is his nickname. My parents said that when he was a kid, he was really difficult to bring up. So they named him this nickname. The ancients believed that when we give a child an ugly name, he will grow up healthily and be easy to bring up. My brother is a witness that proves the right point of our ancestors. He is twenty five years old, tall, handsome and is a policeman now. He has a sense of humor so people enjoy him very much. Now he lives alone in Ben Tre, my hometown. And me. My name is Loan. I am twenty seven years old. I live in HCMC and study at law university now. I also have a part time job as a tutor. I love my family so much and they do, too.

  32. Hello Loan, Thank you for posting your writing at our site. Please check below for better rewriting of your text

    Hello everyone, oday I will tell you something about my family and me. There are 7 members in my family; my 4 sisters, 1 brother, 1 little sister and me. My parents were past passed away for a long time. All of my sisters including my younger sister are married, and they all have their kids. My brother, who is younger than me. His name My younger brother is Viet, but my family, my relatives and my neighbors usually call him Đau. Đau is his nickname. My parents said that when he was a kid, he was really difficult to bring up. So they named him this nickname. The ancientsOur former generations believed that when we give a child an ugly name, he will grow up healthily and be easy to bring up. My brother is a witness a good example that proves the right point of our ancestors. He is twenty five years old, tall, and handsome, and he is a policeman now. He has a sense of humor, so people enjoy him very much. Now he lives alone in Ben Tre, my hometown. And something about me. My name is Loan. I am twenty seven years old. I live in HCMC and study at law university now. I also have a part time job as a tutor. I love my family so much and they do love me, too.

  33. hellow friends i am a student of ba and still i am pursuing my gradution from delhi university . and i have four member in my family me and my younger brother . my favourite actor is imran khan and actress is geniliya disuza and my favourite movie is jane tu ya jane na . my family is very little and very cute . i am very happy with my family. my brother do a job with study . my mother is a house wife and my father is a goverment service men. my favourite english movie is wrong turn and twlight. mostly i am listen music of honey sing . many times my brother do fight with me . and i have many friends but two are my best friend . i like punjabi language and punjabi peoples. i am belong from uttrakhand but i leave in delhi with my famil i dont like cricket but my favourite cricker is andrewm filintop . he belongs from englend .

  34. Hola que tal, yo les cuento sobre un ciudad turistica. San Martin de los Andes is a small city in the west of Neuquen province. It is surrounded by mountains , it is very beautiful and a lot of people visit it in summer. It is famous for its lake, lake Lacar. It is a summer resort for all of the people of Neuquen, and also people from other Towns. The city has many Hotels, restaurants and cafes situated near lake lacar. There is a supermarket called Todo, its located right in the center of the city, the exact location is in the intersection of avenues, 9 of Julio and Corrientes. There are a lot of hotels, laundries, Banks, telephone booths, restaurantes and other. There is a Patagonia bank between Rudencindo Roca Street and perito Moreno street, across from restaurant called Porthos. The Tourist office is located betwen Gral Roca street and San Martin Avenue across front square, and on left to the pólice station one block away.